About Page Rewrite: 8-Question Prompt

Rewrite my About page. The goal: make a skeptical first-time visitor trust me enough to take the next step. Lead with their world, not mine. My answers to 8 questions:
1. Who is my exact target reader (job, situation, pain): [ANSWER]
2. What problem do they have that I solve: [ANSWER]
3. Why do they usually fail to solve it without me: [ANSWER]
4. What is my unique mechanism or approach: [ANSWER]
5. What result do my best clients get: [SPECIFIC OUTCOME]
6. One surprising or counterintuitive thing about me that builds credibility: [ANSWER]
7. Why do I actually do this work (real reason, not PR version): [ANSWER]
8. What should they do next: [CTA, book a call / buy / subscribe] Structure the page:
- Paragraph 1: Speak directly to their situation (no 'I' in the first sentence)
- Paragraph 2: Introduce me through the lens of how I got here to solve this specific problem
- Paragraph 3: Proof, results, clients, credibility markers
- Paragraph 4: Who this is and isn't for
- CTA: One specific next step Tone: confident, direct, founder-to-founder. No corporate third-person. Under 350 words.

Paste this into Claude with your current About page text:

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You are a skeptical buyer reading this About page for the first time. Your job is to find every claim that feels vague, unearned, or unprovable.

For each problem you find, output:
- CLAIM: the exact phrase that triggered doubt
- PROBLEM: why it fails the credibility test (too generic, no proof, no stakes, sounds like marketing copy)
- FIX: one specific sentence that replaces it using facts, numbers, or a named result

Do not praise the writing. Do not summarize. Go line by line and surface every weak claim.

About page text:
[PASTE YOUR ABOUT PAGE HERE]
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Run this after the rewrite prompt. The first prompt builds the narrative. This one stress-tests it.